Chapter 16
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Chapter Sixteen

I waited for the reality of what I said to sink in. โ€œWhat? You said it yourself. I canโ€™t command you to hurt yourself. Fine, letโ€™s go with something else. What if I commanded you to give me all of your money?โ€ I stared down at the girl and she looked away. โ€œSomething youโ€™ve done I see,โ€ I snarled. My eyes flashed. โ€œWhatโ€™s your name?โ€

โ€œStephanie.โ€

I slammed my aura out, and Nix took control as I raged. โ€œDo jumping jacks until I tell you to stop.โ€ Stephanieโ€™s eyes widened, but I turned away to reel in my wolf. She started bouncing up and down, and some girls chuckled, and I snarled. โ€œYou think this is funny? Do you want to join Stephanie? Being made to do something and not being able to stop yourself is a horrible feeling.โ€ I whipped back to the girls, and Nix snarled again. My power struck out again, dropping everyone to their knees. โ€œEveryone here will do jumping jacks until I say stop.โ€ Everyone started, even Tina and Lynn, but I commanded them to stop. โ€œWhat are you planning?โ€ Lynn turned to me.

โ€œThe three of us will go around and command each girl here to tell us if they wielded any power against another. If they say no, they can stop. If the answer is yes, leave them jumping.โ€

Tina nodded. โ€œFor how long?โ€

โ€œIโ€™ll tell them to stop.โ€ I curled my lip and started for Cas. โ€œHave you ever used your power to command another person to do something against their will?โ€

Cas huffed out a breath. โ€œNo.โ€ Her face was rosy from the exertion, and I smiled.

โ€œYou can stop.โ€ I let out a little power to release her from the command and then I clapped her on the shoulder. โ€œIt will get better.โ€ I moved on.

Tina and Lynn walked through the crowd with me and released more and more women, until we had a small group of girls that Amanda and Aurora were surrounded by. This didnโ€™t surprise us.

I walked back to the front and turned to face everyone. Forty women were standing around; some had their hands on their knees and some looked to be catching their breath. The remaining eight girls were huffing and puffing, still doing jumping jacks.

โ€œEveryone else can leave for the day. Tomorrow we will do this again. So more protein at all meals, and I will see you tomorrow.โ€ I called back and the women all left except for the ones still jumping.

โ€œDid you need us to stay?โ€ Lynn turned to me and I nodded.

โ€œYeah. I need you here for when these girls drop.โ€ I watched over them and waited, their legs and arms shaking with their movements.

โ€œStop this,โ€ Aurora called out, and I laughed.

โ€œOr what?โ€ I called back.

โ€œPlease,โ€ Amanda called out in a tired voice.

I stalked back to the group of girls and snarled again, getting in Amandaโ€™s face. โ€œYou tired? You weak? You donโ€™t want to do jumping jacks anymore?โ€

โ€œYes,โ€ Amanda panted.

โ€œDo you think the girls you made do things want to do them?โ€ I tossed back. โ€œDid they want to give you their money? Did they want to do your work? Your bidding? Did they not have their own shit to do?โ€

Amanda started to tear up. โ€œNo.โ€ Her lip trembled.

โ€œSo why should I stop this if you all never did?โ€ I snarled again. โ€œWhy is the council good enough to save you from us, but not good enough to follow for the other rules?โ€

โ€œI donโ€™t know.โ€ She sobbed.

โ€œSo you are above the laws of our kind.โ€

โ€œNo!โ€ She screamed.

โ€œThen what gave you the right to demand anything from anyone?โ€

โ€œNothing gave me the right.โ€ She shook harder.

โ€œThen why did you do it?โ€ I waited, but she stayed silent. โ€œWhy did any of you think it was a good idea to command others?โ€

โ€œIt wasโ€”โ€

โ€œShut up,โ€ Aurora called out, and I glared at her.

โ€œYou donโ€™t give the commands here.โ€ She snarled at me but it was weak. โ€œActually,โ€ A thought just popped into my head and I decided to give it a try. I let my power slam into the women in front of me and they screamed, but kept jumping. โ€œStop jumping.โ€ They all collapsed onto the ground, catching their breaths. One girl crawled away and started to vomit. โ€œPay attention. I command you all to never command another wolf again.โ€

Aurora screamed. โ€œThatโ€™s not fair. Iโ€™m going to be Luna.โ€

โ€œYou will never be Luna. And if by the smallest chance you ever do become a Luna somewhere, you wonโ€™t be able to command your wolves, because you have proven you are not to be trusted with that power.โ€ I walked to Tina and Lynn. โ€œGet these girls home, if they need medical, contact the pack doctor. But everyone here needs to be back tomorrow.โ€ They nodded, and I walked away.

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